Tangents And Trivia
by Al Hargus
CHAPTER THIRTEEN
So You Think You've Got Something To Write About?

I have always enjoyed writing. I wrote short stories in grammar school
back in the 60's. I wrote for the High School newspaper and have been
writing for kite publications since I got involved a bazillion years
ago! I credit almost all of my writing ambitions to my sixth grade
teacher who encouraged me to write about what I thought. (Wish that I
had paid better attention in spelling and grammar classes, though!)
There is actually a method to this writing madness. Oh sure you have
to have things to write about and a general idea of how to say them.
Some of that "How" becomes your personal writing style. Some
of that "How to" is what this chapter of Tangents and Trivia
is all about. And for starters I'm going to jump in the "Way back
Machine" to 1981, Chicago and the Chicagoland SkyLiners Kite Club
newsletter "Sky Lines"
The Real Chapter One!
When the Chicago Land SkyLiners were getting started back in the mid
1980's one of the biggest things that the club needed was a newsletter.
Something that we could send out to the members that would let them know
who we were, where we were going to fly and when. Anita Hoover was the
one that jumped in and started typing. The first Chicagoland Sky Liners
"newsletter" was a single 8 1/2 X 11 sheet with carbon
(Remember carbon paper, gang?) copies that we passed around. The handout
encouraged all interested fliers to meet at Horner Park in the center of
Chicago. Nothing elaborate, but that single sheet got the word out and
the fliers did come.
Anita Hoover held the position of "Newsletter Editor" for
four
years. Most all of us wrote things for Anita to include in "Sky
Lines" and that single sheet grew to several pages of interesting
and informative "Kite news". In the late 80's a CSL member
name of Pat Daly began to take an interest in the Newsletter and
eventually Pat became the Editor. I learned an awfully lot about
writing, and especially in the "Nuts and Bolts" of assembling
a really large and interesting Club newsletter from Pat. AND we had a
really good time doing it too. Between 1986 and 1989 the clubs
newsletter "Sky Lines" was actually one of the most sought
after and anticipated kite publications in the country.
It's A Kite Comic Book
Sky Lines used what we all called the "Comic Book" approach
to writing the newsletter. There were tons of photos, many cartoons
drawn by friends and club members. Articles were supplied by people
everywhere. BUT there were a few tricks that Pat Daly taught us all
about getting people to submit the content for the publication. None of
the staff on the newsletter had a computer , so we did almost all of the
design, assembly, cut and paste manually. Today there are hundreds of
computer based programs for creating newsletters. Would Sky Lines have
been easier to produce if we had had one of these programs? Maybe! But
by far the hardest part of producing a kite newsletter IS NOT putting it
together, but getting articles, photos and content for publication -
Something to write about!!! . That "hunt" for content and the
"Nuts and Bolts" assembly process is what I learned from Pat,
and what I'd like to share with you.
"How To Be The Editor Of The Club Newsletter..." or
"How I learned to stop complaining and start cutting!"
Lets assume that you have decided to help out your local kite club
and you volunteered to be the clubs newsletter editor. It might seem
like a huge and complicated task for the average kiteflier. It doesn't
have to be. There are actually several parts to the job of editor (as
applied to small club newsletters). First is to actually write, entice
someone to write, beg someone for, steal from, buy back from,
photograph, collect or invent the "Stuff" to put in the
newsletter. The second task, and the one that is the
"official" definition of editor, to basically arrange copy,
articles, photos, and edit them for final assembly. The third task of
the "Editor" is to get the final copy to the printer and
ultimately to the club member subscribers.
Acquiring Articles
The first task is probably the hardest, least enjoyable, and least
appreciated of all an "editors" duties. Officially, by
definition, editors are not supposed to write anything for a newsletter.
Unfortunately, their duties and efforts seldom works that way. To start
pick someone you think might be reliable and IN ADVANCE ask them to
write about a club event, or fly. Give them suggestions as to what to
look for, who to ask questions of, generally an outline of what you, as
editor, would like to see in the article. Give the "reporter"
a deadline. Make that deadline at least ten days before you actually
need the copy and PRAY that they will make that deadline. Give your
reporter a size of space you would like to fill in the newsletter. Some
editors will give an amount of words. (i.e. 350-400 words) Some will
give the total number of "column inches" that is a column of a
certain width and so many inches tall. This is a difficult area for an
editor to deal with. You ask a stunt kite flier to write a report on a
certain kite competition. They will then write three or four very
flowery pages about the "joy of victory or agony of defeat".
You only need 250 - 300 words and feelings will be hurt as you edit for
space in the newsletter. Give your reporters parameters (NOTE: The last
four paragraphs contained 200 words or five column inches.)
What Pat Daly used to do was to give those writing assignments by the
armloads. Many of her requests were not date or time related articles
from people, but informational things about kiteflying. For example Pat
would ask Elmer Wharton to write about making his prize-winning
centipedes. Elmer was really late with his article and missed TWO
newsletter deadlines before he got the article in. No problem for Pat
she just saved it for the January issue. She'd ask people for a lot more
"copy" then she could use in any one newsletter. She rarely
had to worry about "too much stuff". If Pat did get more
articles then she could use she'd file them in the future editions bin.
(Trust me it's easy to make file cabinets grow!)
Sometimes a little theatrics and imagination can help you fill pages
for your newsletter. Pat Daly, and the rest of the Sky Lines staff
cooked up many a "hoax" story line to keep with our comic book
image. One April Fools issue Charlie Sotich offered for sale some flying
line he claimed was his own invention. This line looked like any other
30# dacron line but it would puff out to ten times its original diameter
when there was no tension on it. Charlie called it "PuffLine"
His claim was that the line would fluff out and catch the wind creating
lift. It was a "very" serious article and very technical - all
a joke! Charlie actually had several people write him and ask if they
could buy some of this fantastic new flying line. It was great fun and
filled several newsletter pages. (In two issues!) You do need to
remember that you are creating a publication for kitefliers. So you
don't want to get too far away from the original reason for your efforts
- KITES. BUT sometimes you can also use that "other than
kiteflying" idea to generate newsletter content. (For a very
strange TANGENT on that idea SEE: WEIRD KITE TALES - Charlie and the
Peanut Butter Box Kite - in this issue of KITELIFE)
Photographs And Artwork (Non-computer graphics and layout)
If you decide to incorporate photos in your newsletter, get the same
person to take them all. Or better yet take them yourself. Color and
black and white photos don't print well together. Exposure and contrast
can be different. This is another difficult area, photographs are like
articles, hope you can be fussy about what you get but pray that you get
something at all. One interesting idea could be for you to pass out
"Official Newsletter" disposable cameras to fliers at your
next fun fly. Collect them at the end of the event and see what you get.
(This actually will allow you, as the editor, to get your picture into
your own newsletter. A frequent problem in Editorland!) Start
accumulating clip art, that is, the black line drawings you see in
newspapers and magazines. This can come from those newspapers,
magazines, or even kids coloring books. You can get clip art from the
local library or purchase books of it from a book store. Artwork becomes
a compulsion, when you really get involved. I have a billion boxes of
"stuff" I've accumulated over the years that will make great
artwork for some article, someday, if I ever get around to using them or
writing the article, or remember where it all is.
Preparing "Camera Ready" Copy
This job is the one that can make or break the look of a newsletter,
and it's the part of "editorship" that drives printers crazy.
O.K. You've assembled all your "stuff". Your ready to put it
all in a box and take it to the printer. A list of Do's and Don'ts are
appropriate at this point.
Do's And Don'ts
- Do use Black ink; pens, art and anything else should be in black.
Black copies best. Don't ever use blue it doesn't copy. Don't use pencil
or pastel colored inks. - Do use white copy boards (Paste up sheets)
that are not easily seen through (opaque). Don't use colored paper. - Do
keep the degree of density (darkness) of all your copy as consistent as
possible. - Do use rubber cement, a waxer, or a glue stick for
paste-ups. Never use scotch tape. - Don't give the printer copies of
anything if avoidable. Always use first generation copy. - Do use as
much clear margin around the edges, top and bottom, as possible. At
least 1/2" to 3/8" is preferable. Don't run copy to the edge
of the sheet. (Over the edge is called "bleed" it will usually
cost extra) - Keep paste-ups to a minimum. Use the same color for
paste-ups as the background. - Do keep your copy as clean as possible. -
Don't use copy from a newspaper it will reproduce poorly. - Don't use
large black areas on your copy. They reproduce on copiers poorly. -
Don't use color photographs they will reproduce poorly. - Don't use
staples. Staple holes will show as black dots on the final copy. - Do
work with your printer he is the expert.
Copyrights
If you know artwork, articles, plans or photographs belong to someone
else, Don't use them without permission. One of the areas kite
newsletter editors violate copyrights laws most often are those
springtime kite cartoons. You MUST receive permission from the owner of
the artwork for use. Contact your local newspaper for procedure for that
permission. A short Trivia note here. In the beginning I took a lot of
advice from Val Govig, publisher of Kitelines magazine. She had read a
kite review I did in Sky Lines. It was about a kite that had also been
reviewed in Kitelines several months before. She wrote me a letter
pointing out the "similarities" between my review and
Kitelines version. Valerie didn't exactly say "plagiarism" but
what she did say was, "If you have nothing new to write about,
DON'T WRITE about it!"
Valerie also explained to me the legal way to properly request the
use of someone else's artwork, photos or cartoons. She used the example
of a recent Peanuts Springtime Kite Cartoon . (You know the ones that
appear in the newspapers every spring) Val said that you should write a
letter to the author, artist or owner of the art you wish to use. Tell
them where you saw the cartoon or artwork. Let them know where you plan
to reproduce the artwork (Newsletter, brochure, etc.) Your subscriber
quantity and how many times it will be reproduced. Make two copies of
this letter and information. Send one off to the owner and file the
other copy. The owner "should" reply with either permission
(Limited to your parameters) or will tell you that you may not reproduce
the artwork. If after thirty days they have not replied, you might still
use the art. Make sure that you include the author, artist or owners
name with your copied artwork. I wrote to Charles Schultz, creator of
Peanuts, once. No reply, I used the cartoon and kept the request letter
on file for the future, On the other hand I wrote once asking Disney if
I could use a copy of one of their characters. They had a letter in my
mail box seven days after I sent mine. Their letter gave enormously
detailed restrictions for use AND a bill (Trust me the cost was so large
I decided that Mickey Mouse wasn't really necessary for that next
article) I know that hundreds of Copyrighted pieces of artwork are
reproduced every year in Kite publications, without permission. You just
didn't get caught. Someone put in a lot of time and used a great deal of
talent (and possibly money) to create a piece, you're stealing if you
use it without permission. Remember Valerie's comment, "If you have
nothing original to use, don't use someone else's"
Plagiarism (Or who really wrote that stuff)
With the advent of the Internet and the advances of computer
technology, you can download tons of "Other Peoples" stuff at
the click of a button. Copyright laws in the United States are a mess.
Who owns what? How do they protect it? How do they make money from their
efforts? Many computer oriented information centers have given up and
are now just sharing all that knowledge. What could they do to stop it?
Not much, so why fight it! KITELIFE is a good example of the "Share
the Knowledge" idea. Mike Gillard has stated many times that you
can download "stuff" from KITELIFE, but if you use it
elsewhere you MUST give KITELIFE and the original author credit in your
reproduction. (Editor's Note: We ask that you request
permission to reuse our material, but we are liberal with the ok's)
The idea here is basically to share knowledge. But remember that it's
someone else's knowledge that you intend to reproduce and share, Give
the original creator credit. (NOTE: The same permission request method
would work for articles and text you wish to reproduce) One of the major
problems with the copyright laws is that you can alter some parts,
change the format, add new type and rearrange the information and it
becomes next to impossible for the original author to enforce their
copyright claim. (NOTE: Copyright owners have the task to catch the
theft, not the Federal Government)
Just remember that even though it seems like a minor item you plan to
use it could be a major effort and expense by the original owner. (Do
you all remember the American Kite Magazine and Revolution hubbub a
couple of years ago about publication of a quadline design that was just
a little too close to the original Revolution quadline kite?) Be
creative, write your own stuff, think of your own ideas, draw your own
cartoons and take your own pictures. You will feel a greater sense of
accomplishment if all your work is totally your own. Remember what Val
said, "If you have nothing to write about DON'T WRITE!"
USING THE COMPUTER
You might think it's funny for a guy that is writing for an Internet
magazine to say that he doesn't know much about using computers for
newsletter publications, but that's true. I am writing this column on a
Power Mac 7200 and I'm a whiz with Pagemaker, but my computer skills are
pretty novice. Do you all know that I have to "hand deliver"
my monthly articles to Mike on a disc because I haven't figured out how
to send him them on line yet??
There are a ton of really great newsletter and brochure programs out
there. I have yet to use one. Maybe I will, If I can find the time, but
right now that's Mike's job. From the point of view of a club president
looking for an editor you really limit your choices by saying computer
only. A newsletter team is another interesting direction to go. One
person assembles photos, another uses a computer to typeset, and someone
else does manual paste-up. A great newsletter can be assembled without
access to a computer. Computers just make it easier.
I'd like to ask all of you readers out there what computer programs
there are out there that would be of use to a kite club newsletter
editor? What program are you currently using for your club's
publication?
Writers Heaven!
When Mike Gillard approached me a while back about writing for
KITELIFE I was very interested. I wasn't writing regularly for any kite
publication and the idea of a "free" web magazine sounded
pretty exciting. Most Editors give you a limit to what you can write.
I've always felt that I've written something well if 95% of the article
gets published and only 5% ends up on the editor's cutting room floor.
Mike suggested that I just write what I want and as much as I wanted. He
gave me no outline or direction for my article. This is a bit of freedom
that you as an editor or writer, really can't have and never get in a
printed publication. Because my writing is being displayed, stored,
archived, and filed as electronic signals there isn't a space
restriction. I just merrily write to whatever length my idea takes me
and have yet to have Mike tell me, "Too Much Al" (Actually I
do have a limit on photos from Mike. I guess that it depends on the
number of electrons that we are trying to stuff into those little
wires??) The Dieppe, France article I wrote in the Nov - Dec '98
KITELIFE was massive. Most kiteclub newsletter have totally one or two
pages less than my article contained. (Photos not included) This
unlimited access to space does bring up a major writing consideration.
Do people really want to read thirty-six pages of Al's wandering
writings?? So far none of you have complained and I have received no
horse's heads in my bed! That's a good thing. Because to tell you the
truth, I have a lot more TANGENTS to follow
This article cannot possibly cover all aspects of newsletter
publication. I just wanted to cover some of the basics. Just like any
other activity "Practice makes Perfect". Talk to your printer,
BEFORE you are finished, they can give you suggestions that can make
your job and theirs easier. Last but, not least you will probably ask
your self at some point why you are even bothering to do all this work
for what is supposed to be a relaxing hobby. Just remember what Ben
Franklin once said about the printed word. "He that controls the
printed word, controls the world."
NEXT TANGENT - One of the biggest fears many people have is standing
up in front of a large crowd and giving a speech. If you've been to any
Midwest events in the last five years you'll know that I DO NOT have
that problem. The next episode of TRIVIA is going to tell you why I have
the nickname, "The Mouth of the Midwest". OR How to be a big
time announcer and master of ceremonies at a kite event AND not make
(too big) a fool of your self! 